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Last Chance
Tonight will be your final chance
I have nothing left to lose
I didn’t want to do this
But you’re forcing me to choose
Do I want to stay here
Is it worth all you put me through
My heart is freezing over
And there’s nothing I can do
You could do so many things
But you can’t express your love
So, in the right direction
We’ll give you one more shove
But you need to learn to stop shoving back
Don’t fight against our actions
This chance is your last one
Before you and I are over and done
Because I can’t take anymore of this pain
And I don’t want to be the one to blame
Tonight will be your final chance
I have nothing left to lose
I didn’t want to do this
But you’re forcing me to choose
Do I want to stay here
Is it worth all you put me through
My heart is freezing over
And there’s nothing I can do
You could do so many things
But you can’t express your love
So, in the right direction
We’ll give you one more shove
But you need to learn to stop shoving back
Don’t fight against our actions
This chance is your last one
Before you and I are over and done
Because I can’t take anymore of this pain
And I don’t want to be the one to blame
Is everything I write spur of the moment now? I was just bored, I guess...
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But you need to learn to stop shoving back
Don’t fight against our actions
This chance is your last one
Before you and I are over and done
(rhyming pattern, and last line seems a little long.)
Because I can’t take anymore of this pain
And I don’t want to be the one to blame
(last line is a little strange- doesn't make much sense. Might be just me?)
Fwee, this one is one of my favorites!
Don’t fight against our actions
This chance is your last one
Before you and I are over and done
(rhyming pattern, and last line seems a little long.)
Because I can’t take anymore of this pain
And I don’t want to be the one to blame
(last line is a little strange- doesn't make much sense. Might be just me?)
Fwee, this one is one of my favorites!