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I’m tired of always taking the blame
For all the things I did not do
Why should I be the one punished
For what you put her through

You should have just been honest
It would have been easier that way
Neither of us would be hurting this much
And I might have let you stay

Why have you been lying
What is it that I can’t know
Love me, trust me, save me
Or just take your things and go

I want you to stay
But right now I can’t stand you
I won’t let you do this
If only you knew

I know you said that you were sorry
But I can’t accept that now
I don’t know how you can fix this
So, I hope that you know how

I’ve let you all control me
But I swear that I can change
And with these words I’ve written
My heart is out of range
:icontwilighthinata:
Don't ask about the title... It's the exact opposite of my poem... but that was the point... And...There's a song called perfect situation. It was playing... I had no title... You know how things go. Haha. ^^;

Yeah. This comes from a recent incident with Naruto that I don't want to talk about. So, whatever.

And I really like how the last stanza came out. The last line, really. :heart:

Comments and love. They are welcome and appreciated, as always. :)
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Mood: Sympathy ~Itanova Nov 26, 2007  Student
wow twighly chan! poor you a lot of time's peole dont know what there saying=(
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:iconuzumaki-demon-gurl:
as soon as i saw it i was like.. A poem!!!!! then i read it and i realized what it was about by the second lne :( naruto-kun just needs to get a life other then messing up yours but in the end you'll love him ^^
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:icontwilighthinata:
Yeah... I know that.
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:iconuzumaki-demon-gurl:
:) but atleast the poem rocks my shoe (yes it rocks the shoe which in my opinion pwns the sock)
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:iconuzumaki-demon-gurl:
see i am an eraser! (read the journal and you'll understand)
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:iconsaichan3687:
Mood: Joy ~SaiChan3687 Nov 26, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
This a really awesome poem Itami-Chan. That really matches the situation.
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:icontwilighthinata:
Thnx, Sai-chan. :)
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:iconeverfaithful:
I love it.
It be so awesome. MANY GLOMPS!!! ^__^
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:icontwilighthinata:
Wow! Thanks! Here's one for you too. :glomp:
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