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Love to Hate YouHe loves me,
Staring at me with caring eyes,
He loves me not,
Avoiding me and he cuts the ties,

He loves me,
Bringing roses and white wine,
He loves me not,
Yelling and crossing this line,

He loves me,
Hugs me and never letting go,
He loves me not,
Pushes me down and hurts me so,

He loves me,
Kissing me with lips of red,
He hates me,
Walking away when all is said.

Lonely TruthI realized something today,
The reason why I do all these things,
And why I can't seem to ever,
Feel quite comfortable with things.

Deep down and really, truthfully…

I'm a very lonely person,
I have people around but,
It's just not the same,
As having you there to talk to.

We all have our lonely truths,
Times when we feel so lost,
And we just want someone,
To talk to, or feel near us.

It's a slow torture for me all the time,
Every day hearing the clock tick,
More and more it builds,
The loneliness will consume me one day.

I am all I have, in this world…

Floating here in crystal shadows,
The black darkness is menac

StrandedI saw him there, though the blackness,
Bathed in silvery moonlight,
The one that I adore,
More than anything,
He’s too beautiful for this world.

I stopped to stare,
Gazing through the cracked glass,
His eyes fell upon me,
Shining darkly like the stars,
And I winced, turning away.

Never again shall I feel so alive,
As I did in that moment,
Such a rush, only from seeing him,
When he wasn’t even really there.

I have lost all hope,
Even before it began,
Such a twisted reality to dwell in.

I give in to the countless faces,
The many shades of me,
That I am forced to hide from the world,
And to this stranger,
I feel l

ReturnThe darkness that lies within your gloomy soul,
Is something my heart has secretly craved,
For so long, it's been too long since I've seen you,
Why should I hope for anything more?
But there's always that secret part of me,
That will never give up hope,
There's nothing you can do to stop it,
After all, you're the one who started it,
And this just goes as more proof,
That you are my eternal love,
So no one else can ever be.

Long ago, my heart was broken,
My soul was shattered, into a thousand million pieces,
People have tried to pick them up, along the way,
It would have been so easy, if I had let them,
But I can't, and I won't

What If I Feel Lonely?What if I feel lonely?
Will you be my companion,
That draws away the gloom?

What if I feel intimidated?
Will you cheer me on,
And give me that extra dose of courage?

What if I feel weary?
Will you awaken me,
To live a bright new day?

I know you will always be there
Even if it's only in my dreams
Walking right beside me

I know you will be cheering me on
Even in the silence
Holding me up

I know you will stir my heart
Even in the gloom
Energizing my being

2 poems from the couch~Alone~

Sometimes i wonder if any of it could be true,
cause there's nothing left between me and you.
But if i stop to think about it I'll only start to sink,
and standing here alone without you i think I'll need a drink.
So I'll leave you with this lonely song of sadness,
because even you can't make it through this madness.

~A Letter from the Lonely~

And here we meet again, face to face
but my eyes darting away refuse to meet yours.
I'm sure you'll understand one of these days,
but even if you never figure it out, it's alright.

Is it possible for us to live if we hate life?
Can we really fight if we're passive?
Will life still

Come on and Kill meI look you in the eyes,
Just to find
Im mesmerized.
And I can't look away.

We never talk much
in person
but Ill always hope you're there.

You say you love me,
You say we're just friends.
Tell me how you feel
and make up your mind.

Cuz my heart is breaking
and you can't fix it
this time
and maybe never again.

You say you'll miss me
Is that a lie?
I wouldn't know.
anymore.

I gave you my heart
and now its in pieces
But every time you say you love me

My heart sings and Im not trying
to stop it. Is this love?
Or is is this all in my head?
I lie here bleeding and broken and I wonder.

Why dont you just find some one else?

Lonely“Make me whole again,” she begs,
Her eyes wide and weeping
To no one really at all.
Kneeling on grey-green knees
Old pains blossoming up again
She looks into the sky
Swirling emptiness, shades of blue
Empty but beautiful
Just like her.
Her arms wrap around someone not really there
Fingers winding around invisible hair
Grasping for non existent flesh
Wishing desperately for some sort of fulfillment.

depressing poemDrowning

I can barely keep my head up
All I see is light and darkness
I can say that I’ve had enough
In this water it is bottomless

Swallow me into your mouth
Water closing up the gaps
Light is gone and dark is nearing
I need to breathe – take in a gasp.

Cold and darkness closing in
I am hidden so far under
As the cold clings to my skin
I can’t help but start to wonder –

“Will they find me, when I’m hidden?
Will they see that I am gone?
Will they miss me in the ocean?
Will they care that my life is done?

Will they see me, fighting, trying?
Will they notice I’m not there?
Will they miss me

I Really Love YouI really love you, y'know.
The way you stand so tall and fair,
Letting the wind whip your hair around your eyes.
Yeah, you're adorable when you're so nonchalant.

I really love you, y'know.
The way you smile at me and stare,
Right before you kiss me, holding me close to you.
Yeah, you're amusing when you're so foolish.

I really love you, y'know.
The way you can still talk and listen,
Having a conversation about absolutely nothing at all.
Yeah, you're wonderful when you're so compassionate.

I really love you, y'know.
The way you still smile and call me hunney,
Even though I've lost you, and broken my own heart.
Yeah, you're fanta

UnlovedDoes anyone even care about how she feels?
Do they even know she's there?
To her it seems the world would be better off
If she wasn't even here

Does anyone feel the things she does?
Does anyone even know?
About how much she wants to fit in
And how much she wants to glow

She gives so much for everyone else
And never gets anything in return
In a world so selfish and conceited
And she begins to feel alone

So they even know who she is?
Do they really know at all?
Does anyone even care about her>
Or will they just let her fall?

She doesn't feel wanted
She doesn't feel loved
So she sits all the while and wonders
What exactly we

Lonely

Lonely

How small do you want me to be.

I'm left lonely.

So much can be said through silence.

As hard as it seems, all that I need is to close to be seen.

You build your walls for me to climb.

I'm mislead, misread.

Are you company, or companion?

FallingEach and every day,
I am forced to go on living,
Breathing breathless,
Each day knowing,
That you have all deserted me.

Ripping everything that I ever had,
Slipping away from me,
Being snatched cruelly from my grasp,
And now I’m falling…

Every night I ask myself,
The same morbid growing question,
When will my soul finally be set free?

Longing just to have someone,
To hold me in their arms,
And tell me it will all be okay,
My broken heart holds the fear,
That I will never be okay again.

Being made to go on in this world,
When everyone is cruel to me,
And no one really understands,
Even my friends;
They try so har

Lonely SoulLonely Soul

Alone.
In an empty house.
My empty soul is screaming
only for you
but you don't come.
This lonely heart is dieing
slowly rotting from the inside.
This agony,
I wish it would fade
but I know it wont
for it was to be destined
only to me.
Is this what your God
had planned for me?
Is this how he pays me back
for helping the hurt
and healing the crippled?
Am I just a tool that your God
can throw away as he pleases?
Well then I don't care for your God!
Has he truly done anything to help you of I?
This world is cruel
and a simple human like you
can't understand that
until you open your eyes!
If

A PoemWhy can't they understand her?
Why can't they see?
The pain that she feels the emotions that run deep

On the outside she smiles and pretends she's ok
but on the inside she's crying
begging for the heart ache to go away

She thought that he cared, that he was the one.
He told her that he loved her, that she was his only
one.

But then he cheated on her, i guess that he lied.
For months and months all she would do was cry
She always wondered what she did wrong
What made him walk away

Until one day she realized that it wasn't her fault.
He was the one who made the mistake
And he's the one who let it all go to waste

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Suicidal Dream

by ~TwilightHinata, Sep 4, 2007, 1:54:47 PM
Literature / Poetry / Romantic / Teen / Free Verse

Death keeps running through my head
Like some lengthy song
Would it be a surprise to you
If one day I was suddenly gone

It’s always my death that gets planned out
In these sick and twisted dreams
But I know that it would be pointless
You wouldn’t care, it seems

I can tell that I’m asleep
But each death seems so real
Each time I scream, each time I bleed
I only wonder how you’d feel

I’m only living to watch over you
Or else I would have been dead long ago
But you’ll never see that’s why I’m still here
I refuse to let you know

But these thoughts are still clouding my mind
Should I live or should I die
I’d be better off without you near
But without you is only a lie

I may be weak, but I’m just strong enough
I’ll know that I’ll pull through
But I’ll never make it because of me
I live each day for you

Within just a few seconds
We could be torn apart
But that’s all you’ve wanted
Right from the start

If I were gone, would you miss me
Because each day that I’m alive
I’m waiting for you to tell me no
So the winds will whisper “suicide”

Suicidal Dreamby ~TwilightHinata

Literature / Poetry / Romantic / Teen / Free Verse

So, I'm actually pretty proud of this one. It's another one that I just wrote because I was bored... Haha. I do pleasant things when I'm bored, huh?

Now, just to get things straight I'm not about ready to go kill myself. Relax. I'm okay. I mean that. Although, this poem did come straight from my heart. And some of its content is based on fact.

The dedication here goes to Kakashi, and I guess that if you know me... That just kinda speaks for itself. He's a good inspiration for me to write things.

Comments are welcome and accepted. Actually, I'd really appreciate them on this one.

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~Yumikio-Natsuki-Yoko Aug 22, 2012 Hobbyist Writer

Wow this is a brilliant poem, I don't know how to describe it because it's so good. Keep up the amazing poetry.

~TwilightHinata Aug 25, 2012

Aww, thank you so much.

#KakaHina Oct 10, 2007

my, im not faving this just because it has something to do with kaka/hina...im also faving this cause its a nicely written poem ...even tho its a tad bit scary

~TwilightHinata Oct 10, 2007

Thanks!!! =]

#KakaHina Oct 10, 2007

and youve watched us! yay... do i consider that as you joining the club?

~TwilightHinata Oct 10, 2007

Yes please! I just sent my join note now. =]

~Itanova Sep 7, 2007 Student

if you dont read the description it could scare a person

~TwilightHinata Sep 8, 2007

Yeah... I know. But that's why people should read the description.

~rawien Sep 7, 2007 Hobbyist General Artist

ooo i like this. very good, great work!

~TwilightHinata Sep 7, 2007

Thanks.

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